All Comments on 'The Witching Hour Ch. 05'

man it is getting great. cant wait for chapter 6.

This story's getting better and better. Thanks!

Great so far! Double check word usage / spelling and stop teasing me so damn much and give me more!

you are moving it along! I can't wait to get to the rest of the story! Hurry up and post!!!

Excellent story line and tempo. Thanks for the entertainment escape.

I don't even care about the spelling errors! Write to your heart's content. I'm loving this story!

This is a good story,but I am continually thrown out of it by misused words. "strait" means narrowed or bound I think you want to use "straight" as in not crooked or immediate. Also be careful of their/there/they're and your/you're usage.

cynthia

Keep on, I can read any spelling.

I love the story, so please please continue, can't wait to see what happens.

S

Great Story!! Please continue.

You had a fine, engaging story, with near daily chapter releases. Now we wonder if AngelJack has abandoned the story, but we still hope for more!

don't leave us hanging. Great story so far, I hope you plan to do something with it. You seemed to be going places with a plan, not sure what happened but I'd love to see you finish the tale.

I was really getting into your story. Too bad you haven't finished it. I hope you decide to finish it sooner rather than later.

I wait with baited brearh for the next chapter in your story

it keeps me riveted bravo

love your store please finish it

Damn it, I wish you would have finished this.

More! More! More!

I assume the plan was to 'eventually' have something happen to Jack so he wouldn't be such a weakling. But, 5 chapters in and you're still writing unrelated nonsense... Kinda glad you decided to quit.

You have to write more!!! I'm really into this story now and You can cut me off here! I love the way you've focused on fleshing out characters rather than concentrating on sex, its made it such a better story. So Write chapter 6 please!!!!

You stoped in the middle of the storie. You would'ent read a book to the middle then throw the book away or watch a movie half way throw and not want to finish the movie would you?. Well that is how youre storie ended. If you finish it sind it to me at m.sweeten@yahoo.com

come on your just starting the story enjoyed so far keep going

Dude u left me hanging! More more more!

You can't stop there!

I know the cliffhanger is necesary but you can't be serious and stop now right this . Please keep going with your book .

No point asking the author to continue the story it's not been updated in 6 years.

Obviously author has dropped the story for some reason.

I just give a 1 star rating for unfinished stories as they annoy the hell out of me, especially when they were well written.

just saw that this is abandoned in 2008 - *pouts* and it was sooo good!

i do hope you finish this. it is a really good read

I love how "not giving up on it" means "Ha ha, fucker! Fooled you!" on Lit. I guess I really do need to give up and start reading the last chapter of every story I find, just to see if the author is another in an enormously long list of people who abandoned their story. This one is particularly egregious, since it drops off right at the part where you've become attached to the plot and characters and the real action is just beginning. It makes me want to give up on Lit completely and just search Amazon for sci-fi and fantasy erotica.

Look, I realize I should have read the author bio first and seen that you never fulfilled your promise of a chapter 6, but after reading 5 chapters and seeing that bio, it really kinda pissed me off...

I guess thanks for what of this story you did post...

What a fucking waste of my time. Another unfinished story last updated in 2008. There should be some way for lit to put a marker on these so that the reader can be forewarned before getting sucked into it.