All Comments on 'The Witch's Apprentice'

very good story, could have used more details but was a good story

Really nice story Mr Krumpus, almost looks like you might be about to write a sequel? I do hope so :P

Thanks for the comments! Yeah, a sequel might be in order. I can see all sorts of crazy places this might go...

What happens next?

Hahaha! Yeah, I saw that one coming from a mile away! So I'm giving you a 3/5 because it's inventive. I'm going to continue reading into the next installment. But I'll tell you up front that I prefer upbeat stories with happy endings. For example, another author on here who uses the pseudonym shakna wrote a tale called My Sister's A Witch. That's something more interesting to me. But I'm curious enough to see where you are going with this.