All Comments on 'The Witch's Offering Ch. 03'

I really like the intrigue aspect. It adds dramatic tension.

Just starting reading your story, and I’m pleasantly surprised at how much character development you’ve done in theee short chapters - you’ve masterfully balanced character development, plot progression, and world building, into such an easy and fun to read few chapters. I eagerly await your next submission!

Cheers,

Dennis

Starting with a quiet simple premise and building rapidly from there. Terribly excited in where you will lead us with this story. I would say more so than any other, but the foundation in RSC you've already provided has a strong hold.

Suffice to say, my expectations are high ^.^ But my appreciation of your donation is far greater. Thank you for another lovely chapter.

PS I think in this scenario, he is "Tank" though, isn't he? Because one smoking hot chick just asked for an operator to help her through an impossible mission. (That last sentence kind of tripped my head up a little, but its a compliment! I swear!)

I’ve enjoyed the character development so far, but adding in the political intrigue has taken this story to the next level. I’ve got to admit I’m curious as to how it will all play out.

For not being your normal timeline, you really rocked this one. Thanks for all your efforts.

Kal’s exploit’s have been a really good read, I’m looking forward to reading more.

But this new series has really grabbed my attention. Lethe is a schemer, Kat sounds delicious and Ren is a little strange, but totally believable as a character. I love his inner nerd.

Thank you for posting these great stories.

I do Hope you get around to completing it soon.

Very good as always nice to read.

It is getting better and better.

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