All Comments on 'The Witch's Offering Ch. 04'

Nice to read another chapter. Glad I happened upon the note in the bio. Love this story too. Hope you continued to be inspired for it, in its own time.

Given how much you have submitted recently, it is hard to complain. But this was painfully short. The amount of information about monster girls, morphs, and weres was nice. But otherwise this didn't advance Ren's story so much as Xaal's. The sex was too brief to be consider erotic, though you set the stage for future encounters that might be interesting. You spent enough time on them that Max and Jen may prove to be more story-related in the future, but they come across as incidental here.

Having an erotic story where the main character is prevented from having sex is quite the challenge. But you are one of the few that I think can pull it off.

I look forward to getting more.

Really enjoy reading, hope more is to come

Very good , keep um cumming