by ArtForm
I can't wait for more. Your writing style is fantastic. I'll be eagerly waiting for more.
Great to have you back. Great story intrigue, suspense,subterfuge great plot. Looking forward to future chapters
I really like this story line... Can't wait for the next one!!!
I've been struggling for weeks now to find a well written interesting new story, this is great so far can't wait to see more
Don’t like the story. I mean she said he a wolf we know he will show her so why hold out. The idiot coward already lost her once and let her mind get scrambled and he watched as the vamp whatever almost claimed her. Instead he just let her go again so the other bastard can try again. Yeah real good work. When you want drag a story Along it needs to make sense. Since wolf is such a coward mal just needs get bit by vamp and wolf can end story jumping from highest mountain onto rocks.