All Comments on 'The Wolves Ch. 001'

by Exigaet

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Good start, hope the next chapter is coming soon.

Frankwuo over 4 years ago

Can't

wait to see where this goes

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Like It So Far

But you need some help with editing and please stay to one scale of measurement. A spear that is 2.6 meters long is over a foot longer than a halberd that is 89 inches long.

taco1085 about 4 years ago

nice

don't listen to anonymous, this is your story and if they hide behind a fake name then their input does not count. Great start to the story, cant wait to read the rest. This is going to be interesting especially to see if they make it home in time to meet the guests at 2000 pm... I read this for the enjoyment of what the writer wrote and the story he is telling. Not to be tearing someone for work someone else presumes incorrect. have a great one and keep posting and I will keep reading

Anonymous10 months ago

Why do you inches?

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Updated May 2, 2020: I am still writing The Wolves, but will no longer be posting any new chapters on Literotica. You can find more up-to-date chapters on other sites, or on my Patreon page itself. I'll be leaving the links to my patreon page and discord below to make it easi...

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