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Taking the best from D&D mash it in with Star Trek and this is what I imagine you would get. 5stars. Please keep on with this story line.

OMG, please pick a tense. You bounce from past tense to present tense like a monkey on a bungee cord. And not as frequent, but still present, are the point of view shifts. Great potential, but you really need an editor.

You have been putting so much focus on exposition about the dungeons and the rules around it that you’ve so far spent no time letting us get to know any of the characters outside of a minor blurb. This makes it really tough to be invested in your story and world if we know more about the drop rates of gems and not who anyone is and how they got to where they are now.

I'm enjoying the story but as others have said you've spent ALOT of words on world building and such. Which is important but not all at once. I feel like I don't really know the characters at all. You've also spent no time explaining the backstory, the war or anything. Also please pick a tense.

great story love this plot