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by sparkwood

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dannyboy1958dannyboy1958over 3 years ago
part 2 please.....

i really hope theres a part 2 and 3 and 4....

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 3 years ago
A little stilted

But I think you show promise, more please.

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New to writing erotica, but always wanted to have a try.