by iWriter4U
How does this show up and not immediately have 5 stars? This is the kind of work that makes one want to read your entire catalog.
Which I'm about to start right now.
Nice tale and with legs for a future chapter. Bravo. One or two spelling and grammar errors, but we all make them. However, I ask you to PLEASE sort out the "I" and the "me" and the "my."
NOT "I blame my sister and I." It should be "I blame my sister and me (or myself)."
NOT "A discussion between mum and I." It should be " A discussion between mum and me."
"I" is the SUBJECT of a sentence. "Me" is the object of a sentence.
I hate criticising - I prefer helping, so I hope you receive this as it is intended, best intentions.
More please.
Did you consider bringing sister home for mama’s pleasure and your pleasure too?
There has to be a part two where the sister leaves her husband and has a relationship with her brother.
5 stars!
"I think I'd be correct if I noted that every position is open except missionary and there will be no kissing? - WTF? RESPECTING THE DAD = NO RESPECT FOR THE SON! Sad story, in the end the son is not quite good enough and will always only be 2nd best to the Mom...
Great writing but didnt like the ending. No missionary or kissing doesn't fit that level of commitment or relationship. it s like a drag race into a brick wall. Its a very impersonal resolution in mynopinion.
Well done. Very well written. I think that mom and son are more in love then just loving each other. A romantic and sexy loving story. I truly think there could be more chapters maybe sis wants some loving to
Wonderfully crafted story in every respect. I can see a sequel down the road when Maria's kids are out of the house and her husband is gone and Pete comes to the rescue again. I think Maria wants that too...
Loved this story but the ending was a little sudden there should have been more sex 5 stars
A very long story with too much dialog (most of the story sounded like a transcript of a therapy session) and a let down ending. Wish they would have committed to each other and been exclusive. The ending just landed with a thud.
An OK story but kind off an abrupt ending. I thought the build-up was leading to where Maria was gong to at least watch as Pete and his mom had sex for the first time. Oh, well . . . .
interesting approach ,exciting to follow an update if it came as a continuance 5/5