All Comments on 'The Women of Custer City Ch. 01'

This is a hell of a first entry! Great character work, an immediate hook, and a really smart narrative engine. I don't know how many of these you're planning on writing, but it feels like it could run for a while without getting stale. Can't wait for the next one.

Fuck Yeah! Love the concept. Groundhog Day for adults. Anticipating some backstory on how the situation came about. Keep writing and don't wait too long to release the next chapter.

Interesting storyline. Very confusing at beginning as to whom the narrator was, male or female? I hope you try to explain how this loop happen. If after over 1200 attempts, he has only gotten one down, you’ll be writing for 1000 of chapters. Good l luck.

Part 2 has been submitted.

What an excellent piece of Science Fiction. It stands up really well on its own as a short story but I would love to see it continue and the background teased out