All Comments on 'The Women of Honey Hollow Pt. 03'

Great story so far keep it going all 5's

This series has been great up to this time. I hope you continue to develop it as I am looking forward to meeting the other participants and their nuances

When does Julie's oldest daughter turn 18?

keep going

Are hidden here. There is a REASON why the women can't have boys. New women coming in get affected as well.

Thanks for your comments. Carol turns 18 in part 6

Paul (Bourbononice)

You have interesting ideas and you know what you want to say but you need to re-read and re-write to see if you actually said what you meant. I'll look with interest for other contributions

Thanks for the input. Sometimes things don't come out as expected when you have to edit to keep the content like LIT requires.

Paul (Bourbononice)

FFS it's through. If you want to write do it properly and stop being lazy.

PLEASE CONTINUE !!