All Comments on 'The Wonderful Life with My Slut'

The biography of a budding author. ... It still sucks, sorry..

ever heard of punctuation? try it ....ou'll like it

1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

This has to be a joke,or an 11 y.o. writing. Doesn't anyone screen this junk. It's satire, right?

You have story potential but its obvious you're new. Slow down. Feel the scenes and discribe them as if you're living it right now.

So the writer said in his last paragraph that his STD cunt wife's goal is to fuck 500 men!.....gosh this is so stupid, nonsense, low context and lack of creativity.

The writer must be a freaking retard to write something so stupid and pathetic like this lame story.......and it makes sense such low score!

This garbage of story wasted 3 minutes of my time.

1* for this crap and poor story.

Fantastic character arcs. A broiling epic of lust and desire mixed with the desperate need to clean your house and find a bed.

Good luck with the vacation.

What a waste.....

Congrats