All Comments on 'The World Pt. 01'

Good story can you make the next one a lot longer

More please! This was a great read; you’re a talented writer.

It reads like a cheap porno it shouldn't be labeled si-fi or fantasy there's to much girl on girl already

Please write more chapters

thank you for the feedback - always love it. stories will unfortunately be around this long as it's all my spout of inspirations can last. but the next one is on the way!