All Comments on 'The Wrath of the Daemon Ch. 02'

It's like Norm Crosby came back to life with a keyboard... retracted files indeed...

sounds like the shit is about to hit the fan. this getting good.

This series started out great. But now it's starting to drag...

Sick fetish women haters may enjoy this shit but normal people are repulsed.

Please no more,Spare us..

I enjoy the suspense you put into your stories. Looking forward to the next one.

I knew that he was trouble... Nice backdrop. Love the story. Sorry this will be end of this saga.

I should hate you.

You keep leaving the story in the most interesting hangovers, killing me out of curiosity.

But I have enjoyed your saga abut D so much that I can`t really hate you.

Please, keep writing and bring the next one soon.

Ephront

Mike: I really think you should post, previous to your next submission in Daemon`s Saga, The list and the order of the whole saga.

I found about the saga a couple of days ago and I`ve been reading all I can, But I think I`ve missed some parts

Some writers here post the order of stories in a series that are not marked as chapters on their biography page to help their readers read them in order.

Great writing. No real way to make it better. That is unless you add more to. Please don't let so much time pass till your next post.

Thank you

Yet another wonderful chapter in the Story of D

That has got to be the best closing line to a chapter I've read In years love your work hate to see it end . Also glad that it has an ending it's dreadful when great stories don't get finished

Don't ever stop. Any story idea, any plotline...you seem to make the mundane....not!

Thank you.

unless some body wants to make an example, TK U MLJ LV NV

I assume Elvis fired all his shots into Carter’s vest. He really should have fired into his forehead, that would be a suitable sacrifice when D discovers the breach.

Righteous know it all people are a danger to us all. They only need to open their mouths to cause harm to anyone associated with them. Keep going, great story.

Too much mysterious allusion and no explanation! Damned frustrating, especially the abrupt ending of,"Family". And no directive to this series, as a continuation. Just too much contrived mystery!

Horrible. There are ways to make a story more impossible to follow and enjoy but I dont want to give you any hints because you would certainly use them. Never use two pages for what can be done on a post it note.