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"What is the situation that they will be getting ready for, sir?"
"Agent Carter here has just let out some top secret information on public airwaves," he fired a fourth time, "based on that information he so foolishly and irresponsibly released, we have reason to believe that an attack will be conducted against certain assets we have been keeping on our radar."
"We are mobilizing all this manpower over two women?"
"No," he fired a fifth time, Carter's groans were becoming louder, "we are mobilizing this manpower for the response that will come from our primary target: D. I just hope that we have enough resources to at least hold the worse of it at bay." He looked at Carter, "congratulations, Agent Carter, you will forever be known as the man who killed a city."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoHorrible. There are ways to make a story more impossible to follow and enjoy but I dont want to give you any hints because you would certainly use them. Never use two pages for what can be done on a post it note.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoToo much mysterious allusion and no explanation! Damned frustrating, especially the abrupt ending of,"Family". And no directive to this series, as a continuation. Just too much contrived mystery!
dgfergieabout 2 years agoRighteous know it all people are a danger to us all. They only need to open their mouths to cause harm to anyone associated with them. Keep going, great story.
WhoGivesAShitover 5 years agoI assume Elvis fired all his shots into Carter’s vest. He really should have fired into his forehead, that would be a suitable sacrifice when D discovers the breach.
tazz317over 5 years agounless some body wants to make an example, TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoDon't ever stop. Any story idea, any plotline...you seem to make the mundane....not!
Thank you.
Skinnersbladealmost 7 years agoThat has got to be the best closing line to a chapter I've read In years love your work hate to see it end . Also glad that it has an ending it's dreadful when great stories don't get finished
Moorlaffsalmost 7 years agoGreat writing. No real way to make it better. That is unless you add more to. Please don't let so much time pass till your next post.
Thank you
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoSome writers here post the order of stories in a series that are not marked as chapters on their biography page to help their readers read them in order.
