All Comments on 'The Writing's On The Wall'

Excellent story. Nice to see Silversmith back. Are you going to group the Silversmith stories as a series?

Great story - thank you

I like the plot, very imaginative. I wish the story had continued a little more after Silversmith and Kelly left, something like Steven quickly realizing he'd just gotten two gorgeous women under his control (okay technically Taylor was under Maggie's control).

LOL . That was cute . Even for you .

Lucky fellow!

Really smart short story excellent structure & well wrought intrigue. Clever introduction of characters and as a previous comment observes ‘lucky fellow’. A pleasure to read and to imagine from that point on.

Loved it. Top little story

5;5

Wait, so, what did Maggie really look like? Or did I misread that?

Great story, although I wish it was a little more fleshed out.

Very unusual an quite entertaining.

A definite 5.

Ha! Nice.

"Sloppy work" indeed.

Just wondering, how do you make money by donating a kidney to science?

Can’t he just order Maggie to order her to obey him, too?