All Comments on 'The Wrong Abductee'

by Dhc000333

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edsponyedsponyover 10 years ago
not badly written

but got very boring by the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I liked it very much. Just would of liked a different ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This was very interesting, you really got into the head of the main character. Not many authors bother to do that. But this was no in-and-out story either, so there's room for more character development. This was not what I expected from this category, but it was still an interesting read. I'm going to check your profile for other writings. I'm still not exactly sure what happened at the end, but it's nice to see a "little guy" get his back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Not Erotica...

but totally fun. I love screwy in the head and this was a blast to read!

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Black American male. I write these stories because it is fun. All stories are written to see what people think about my writing and creativity. My first erotic story was in high school