by Dhc000333
This was very interesting, you really got into the head of the main character. Not many authors bother to do that. But this was no in-and-out story either, so there's room for more character development. This was not what I expected from this category, but it was still an interesting read. I'm going to check your profile for other writings. I'm still not exactly sure what happened at the end, but it's nice to see a "little guy" get his back.
but totally fun. I love screwy in the head and this was a blast to read!