All Comments on 'The Wrong Side of the Tracks'

wow so good can't wait for the next part.

The build up is intense, I loved it

Ok now that's just a tease. The buid up to the ending was great and all but i seriously want to know what happened to them after that.... Great story thogh!

This is a GREAT story and one I would like to see follow through to the end about their future relationship and what they do with their current ones.

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT!

does this story remind anyone else of Avril Lavigne's Sk8r Boi? it's a great story; reminds of how I used to sing it about a girl instead of a guy... ah, memories. charmed my first gf into a date with that song. great story, hope you keep writing stuff.

Fantastic story...really do want to know what happens after this! Longing for more!

THANKS .... damn good story quite short though.. plz add some more chapter of thier life...

Its been 15 years and it's still a great read although short, wish it was longer.

If you start writing here again, Part 2 of this should be first up. Whether or not Sherri and Alejandra end up together, it should still be a very good story, so long as the husband meets the karma he deserves...