All Comments on 'The Wrong Sister Pt. 04'

Cannot get enough of this story and the characters. 5 stars is not enough!

WOW! This story is one of the best I've ever reading this genre. You can't write fast enough! LOL! 5*

Excellent - great writing

Looking forward to the next one

Wrong category, it's not incest. But an excellent series so far. Thought the title referred to Izzy but could now be referring to Hannah! Cant wait for the next chapter! 5 stars!

Thanks for your comments everyone! For those mentioning the category - I put the first three parts into Erotic Couplings and the moderator clearly felt parts 2 and 3 belonged in the Incest/Taboo category! So I decided not to fight the power when I published chapter 4. I guess it falls under taboo?! But then I'd have said everything I've written falls under that.

Basically, I don't know!

Pick a tense (past is best) and stick with it. Especially don't slip between present and past tense in the same paragraph.

I lovfe the emotion and the sex in your writing!

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Did. Not. See. That. Coming.

Describing the passing of Mum brought out some raw emotions, dammit I shed tears to erotica! With Hannah's confession, have to keep reading and see where it takes us.