All Comments on 'The Wrong Treatment Pt. 03'

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Awesome story can’t wait for more

I'm torn by this one. On one hand, this has all the hallmarks of stories I love: hot, nasty action sparked by over the top of supernatural circumstance. But the POV being from the outside looking in seems to cut a lot of the action short and leaves a lot of gaps on the best details. And seeing it all go down from the perspective of a guy not only not getting any, but is actively getting his heart broken kills me a little.

I'd love to see an expansion telling the story from the active participants POVs someday.