All Comments on 'The Wyrm's Curse Ch. 05'

by Felix921

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Felix921Felix921over 5 years agoAuthor
wooopsie...

wow, so i don't know if anyone will see this, but yeah... mea culpa. I do not know what had shaken loose in my head at the time of the writing that I managed to get the young woman's name wrong, but I did. You were right, faithful Anon. The name change was an oversight on my part.

Felix921Felix921over 9 years agoAuthor
I think you must have....

Yeah, I think you missed Chapter 4. Check it out and that should fill in the gaps (:

Felix921Felix921over 9 years agoAuthor
I think you must have....

Yeah, I think you missed Chapter 4. Check it out and that should fill in the gaps (:

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Name changed?

Wasn't the woman who sucked Kara called Victoria?

In the coach, or did I miss a part?

Felix921Felix921over 9 years agoAuthor
thanks :)

yeah, I like doing a bit of story and character development beyond just the sex - glad you enjoyed both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent

The emotional connection and intimacy between the two of them is great (and the sex is hot too). Awesome work!

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