All Comments on 'The Year is 2020'

If I get the gist of this little ditty correctly, this story is taking place sometime after W W III. John, alone on the roads, leads me to believe there aren't many people left: the population has been dicimated. When he comes up on a few guys pushing a female around he automatically thinks she's a Damsel in Distress and that the guys pushing her around are Evil Bastards. At that moment, Jen could just as well have been a Mass Murderer who had killed all those men's wives and children. Does John stop to ask ?? No. John pulls a gun and starts blasting away. The story is interesting, but some of it just doesn't hold together. In fact, John's personality changes about midway through the story ~ from hardcore/troubled drifter to pussy-whipped Mr. Nice Guy. Good Grief. Ron

This was a very good chapter. Im so glad that i got to read it. I do hope you continue asap. Im wondering how things will be going between them two.

but I don't think you write more.

Why post a good story and not end the damn thing. Its an asshole thing to do.