All Comments on 'Theft of the Heart Ch. 05'

I'm loving this so far, more frequent updates would be great but not being a writer I don't know how difficult it may be to keep a story going! Just please don't rush the story line as some authors are wont to do, trying to get a finished product!

Nic going to have some explaining to do when the sisters find out he is a vampire.

I love this story nik is gonna to kill both of their mates if they find out he's not what thought he was .....omg what they start hating because he kept what he is a secret...now my mind is racing with what ifs

Need now more!!!

ha,ha :)

Definitely worth the wait. Glad you're back. More please.

Love it!!! More,(soon!) please!!!! :-)

This story is catching on whole new level. It may not be as erotic/sexual as many stories are on this site, but I can honestly say this is one is by far the greatest I've read in my short time here. Dude you got a talent, and for that it would be such a shame to let the story end here, so please make another (if not more) chapter(s).

Great work!! :)

I keep coming back faithfully for an update. Please don't forget about us, this story is getting better with each chapter!

This story is really enjoyable... I can't wait for more!

Leaving us hanging out on a limb like you are doing. I'm beginning to stop getting on this site as much now because even with great writing, authors are leaving those reading the finished product of their submissions in limbo for months and from what I have seen, years without updating anything. It's a hurtful feeling to expect something not there. Life may happen on your end, I understand, but anticipation, buildup and excitement without a release is happening on our end. I'm just downright over this site.

So it's been a couple months, when do we get more?

This story is sooooo good. Please come back and finish it.

Please update

Please keep writing i love your story. I hope you're well and ok! Please publish again soon!

I love this story please keep it going!

So this is a great story but I would love to finish it please

Great story dont normally read the vamp ones but this i love. Please please finish it i need to knw how it ends

I love this story. I hope you finish it.

SO YOURE SERIOUSLY GOING TO LEAVE THIS ON A CLIFF HANGER. I love your writing I really want more WHAT HAPPENED.

Ayyyeeee I saw this on tumblr too please finish I love this 😍😍😍

This is a great Story, cut sadly never saw it completion!

Thank you for this story! I very much appreciated it. Of course I wish it would conclude.....:)

Oh man I hope you come back to his account and finish this story. Does anyone know if this writer has posted the story on any other platform