All Comments on 'Their First Toys Ch. 03'

by leBonhomme

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SchlockTheMonkeySchlockTheMonkeyalmost 11 years ago

The first sentence was enough to make me give up on this. That's impressive, in a warped sort of way.

leBonhommeleBonhommealmost 11 years agoAuthor
Okay

Perhaps understandable, if one jumps into the story without knowing what the girls did the night before, and then does not read on to find out what they do next.

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