All Comments on 'Their First Toys'

If you only read the first chapter, you are right, like many others who bombed what was intended to be a brief one-off story. Author's pride, I went ahead and tried to satisfy readers' expectations. I had fun discovering what else could develop, and readers have given the subsequent chapters more stars.

Good, fun story. Just needs more, kinda left off with nothing :/

Yes, in a way, but because the story arouses erotic expectations, unfulfilled ones. I can imagine that that was the author's intention. If it was, the story was successful, just frustrating.

I was also disappointed at the end, that it was going to be left to me to imagine what could happen - not that I couldn't. Maybe the author can be induced to giving his version. Call the girls Jane, Kathy and Laura.

This was a major let down and disappointment and that's being kind!!?