All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 003'

Your story is certainly more literary than most on literotica. It's pleasant to have a story with actual characters and conversations for a change, and I look forward to the next chapters. I played Da:Origins myself, and I'm intrigued to see how your alternate history of the blight plays out.

Excellent story, engaging characters, convincing dialog, this series has perhaps been the best I've encountered on Literotica.

I enjoy this more every time I read it. Never having played DA, this is all new to me.

Im a huge DA Origins fan played through it so many times. This is amazing im loving the alternate reality you have in this, there is so much you can do with a story as in depth as DA Origins and I cant wait to see where you go with this. Brilliant writing and I look forward to going on this journey with your characters.