All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 009'

Can't wait for more!

My only complaint: too short!!! Love this story. More please!!

Young this story this morning have spent most of my day with it

Enticing well written

Complex plot

Might retread the chapters so far to deepen my undersranding✔️✔️✔️

I agree. When the writing is this good, readers want more, much more. We're greedy that way. ;-D

Some more description of the characters would be nice. I dunno who looks like what and what they're all wearing

JC

I must apologise Elyssa, your story has me enthralled, to such an extent, that I have neglected to vote on your series so far. As soon as I get to the end of the chapter I’m rushing to load the next one. I will now return to the start and rate every chapter it’s well deserved 5 star excellence.

Thank you for your time and efforts in entertaining this over the hump Aussie Battler.

Regards JJim