All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 012'

Now I'm going to have to wait 3+ Days for the next chapter! (Ps, awesome at keeping a schedule, I'm trying to decide if you already have it all written out or if you're just a diligent committed person. For my own pride I'm thinking you are just enjoying torturing us by making us wait, and not that you're a super human who can just write one good chapter after another and always take 2-4 days to post) Truly love it, except that I love it and I have to wait for the next chapter. If you ever take 5 days for the next post I'm going to start searching the hospitals for a blacked out women and force them to wake up and finish my story.... *cough* er, your story.

I'm surprised she hasn't mentioned any of the "side quests" that provide better gear, rewards etc as they travel such as the "Red Jenny" quests in Denerim. Beyond an idle curiosity about the party relationships I have no real complaints and laud your comparative story telling.

I love this. Thank you for posting it. I'm with the anon below, it' taking too long!! Not really a complaint I just hate waiting. I really appreciate your work here, especially on a free site!!! Thank you again!! Luv this.

I just caught up and finished this last chapter. Now I have to wait for my next fix. Rats!

I love this so god damn much, please dont ever stop, This is my most favourite self insert type story ever! love it!

The only bad thing about this story is Lit's utterly horrible chapter navigation. Not xactly the author's fault.

I love everything else about it.

I'm usually pretty good about finding some constructive criticism but I got nuttin'

What powers Bodahn's cart? Is it like a magic car or something? All that's ever mentioned are the two dwarves driving and later on, how horses are rare and only for the very wealthy. So what makes it move?