by ElyssaCousland
whell i found the rest of ur story on a03 and am going fo finnish reading it there cause of the back log here just want to say its a wonderful tale
I know you’ve already written much further into the story already by now, but I’m hoping you take the opportunity to have Carver survive as well as Bethany, seeing as Sierra was able to save more soldiers, who were subsequently able to aid in the evacuation of Lothering, meaning that the entire Hawke family could have made it to Kirkwall (he could still end up becoming a Templar/she could still end up joining the circle/they could still end up joining the grey Wardens)
I agree with the previous commenter. An expansion of the story involved would be AMAZING!
To; ElyssaCousland
Also, have you thought of setting up a Patreon account?
I for one would love to see and support you there.
If only to allow us to show our support.
Sincerely GriffinCri7