All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 083-084'

Elyssa,

Thank you for a riveting story. I am most impressed with the continued and sustained improvement in your writing from the start. I love the concept of the main protagonist being transported into a RPG game. It has overtones of Over_Red's "Dream Drive" series but his is purely fictional, whereas you place your character in to a well known RPG.

Congratulations. I look forward to the forthcoming chapters.

Mal