by Dinsmore
If it were possible to give it 200, I would. If I didn't know better, I'd think you have been living in our house....kind of eerie, really, but wonderful. This is definitely one to go in my files. I have someone with whom I'm sharing this one as soon as possible. Thank you so very much!
I really like your writing style, plenty of banter between characters and they are all honest and up-front about themselves.
Interesting - if real life were so simple :)
Also, the descriptions of sexual acts are vivid and descriptive, but not over done.
Well done.
I have bookmarked your profile to read more
Dinsmore,
Two people who were attracted but not available get back together. I'll but it. Timing is everything, relationships, business, whatever. If people can get the timing right magic can happen.
Welcome back, it's been awile since you wrote a new one and I for one was going through withdrawl. This is the third of the four new ones I've read today (started at the bottom of the list and working up). You are still the master of the romance genre. Thanks.
how candid your characters are. The dialogue has an almost poetic rythym to it that speaks to how well these two people really do know each other. Very well written!
Kind of like a tennis match looking back and forth to whom is speaking - it seems most natural the way your puppets speak to each other in our presence.
Nice work Author
With Higher Regard
One feature of this story I particularly enjoy is the openness of this couple. A most valuable asset for a happy marriage.
Boyd
person who doesn't want to be in the kind of relationship so skillfully described here.
As long as the people do their homework and follow the rules - even if they are not quite that complete heh
Nice sotry with great ideas -
You have to talk to each other.
They spent 5 years talking and listening as they became best friends.
We should all be so lucky.
What's not to love about this story, best friends become lovers, then marriage, family and the happily ever after. 5+ stars