All Comments on 'There Have to Be Rules'

by Dinsmore

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Lady_SilverLady_Silverover 17 years ago
Absolutely loved it!

If it were possible to give it 200, I would. If I didn't know better, I'd think you have been living in our house....kind of eerie, really, but wonderful. This is definitely one to go in my files. I have someone with whom I'm sharing this one as soon as possible. Thank you so very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Like it, a lot

I really like your writing style, plenty of banter between characters and they are all honest and up-front about themselves.

Interesting - if real life were so simple :)

Also, the descriptions of sexual acts are vivid and descriptive, but not over done.

Well done.

I have bookmarked your profile to read more

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 17 years ago
Why the hell not!

Dinsmore,

Two people who were attracted but not available get back together. I'll but it. Timing is everything, relationships, business, whatever. If people can get the timing right magic can happen.

Welcome back, it's been awile since you wrote a new one and I for one was going through withdrawl. This is the third of the four new ones I've read today (started at the bottom of the list and working up). You are still the master of the romance genre. Thanks.

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
I loved

how candid your characters are. The dialogue has an almost poetic rythym to it that speaks to how well these two people really do know each other. Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Coversationally Impressive Author

Kind of like a tennis match looking back and forth to whom is speaking - it seems most natural the way your puppets speak to each other in our presence.

Nice work Author

With Higher Regard

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

One feature of this story I particularly enjoy is the openness of this couple. A most valuable asset for a happy marriage.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Name one

person who doesn't want to be in the kind of relationship so skillfully described here.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
True love ought to work that way -

As long as the people do their homework and follow the rules - even if they are not quite that complete heh

Nice sotry with great ideas -

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
The best thing about having Rules is

You have to talk to each other.

They spent 5 years talking and listening as they became best friends.

We should all be so lucky.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
THOSE ARE NOT RULES

more like a play-book. TK U MLJ LV NV

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

What's not to love about this story, best friends become lovers, then marriage, family and the happily ever after. 5+ stars

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