All Comments on 'There is a First Time for Everything'

Girls go from baby girl to woman when their cherry is picked. Tough emotionally, but that's when I grew up. Tell us some sexy 'adventures' now that you have crossed the line.

Thank you.

A very typical first: 'Love 'em and Leave 'em.Thank you

This is the story of cherry popping with girls. It happens to all of them.

Write some please.

This scenario is the general introduction to sex for girls UNLESS they get married.

Pretty well written, so some more now that she has her feet on the ground. Thank you.

Wow!! A truthful first time story. I enjoyed the drama, but not the ending. Write some more please.

I usually refran from negative commenting... But this story is just not well written. The repetitive mantra of "Take cock" was childish and distracting. The transitions no well thought out. You need a much better editor.

What a sexy story. Thanks for sharing it with us. PLEASE write some more

Ah memories! A great story of a young girl giving her first to a jerk. We fall in love, lose our girl dreams, giving it to the first guy who says "II love you."

Well written, please write some more. Thanks.

mind and body still tingle until the letter, TK U MLJ LV NV

That worthless sonofabitch doesn't deserve a hot piece of ass, much less a virgin!

You do know that The Godfather came out 13 years after Some Like it Hot. Right?

Take Cock, Suck Cock...???reads like it was written by a 12 year old.

Yah, experienced guys with sweet words and affectionate attention can win a girls love. They usually give talk about how beautiful you are and lure you into their hands. Once you gave your virginity, he will take you forgranted. After he had enough fill inside you, he will hop on to the next victim. Most of us "fairy tale princess" lose our first to this kind of guy. They know what they want and will get it whatever it takes with speed and control. These are also the men who turned to be womanizer or cheating husbands. Hope mine was given to my husband, I was his first.

Please don't put any more rubbish like this on here

liked the plot - not all (or even most) deflorations end with a "And they lived happily ever after" I think stories are more erotic the closer they come to what might be reality and yours is unusual in the degree to which it does.

On the writing style: first/third person present POV does allow the author to immerse the reader more completely in the action, and that is good, but she has to be consistent, and you weren't always. The ending, in which the writing shifted to the past tense, was a bit jarring in that regard. It would have been a bit of work but you could have made the protagonist's account regarding "Dear Julie" and what went on in her head after Dennis left for college in the fall before the letter arrived very vivid using the present tense - much more so than in the past tense.

I gave this five stars.

I appreciate your ideas and perhaps touched on a memory or two.

Someone sent me an E-Mail: Yes the story is basically true, my first time. I have no hard feelings about the past. Guys seduce girls, most gals have been hit on successfully at one time or another. After you get 'broken in,' I understood the game better. If you enjoyed my seduction, let me know if you want sequels.

Thank you, Julie

Your beautiful story brings back not only her first time but a lot of girls at the time and even now for that matter.....I do think that the age has been lowered since we first made love back in the day. I think you should write of your other lovers as they appeared in your life....would be very interesting and sexy.....and thank you for your first effort ....it is very exciting.

Guess would be your story takes place late 50's early 60's.

Yes he was an asshole but so were a lot of us guys back then thinking only of pussy, I've had my share of the sweet young things and they were not all 18 and over when they gave it up.

Absolutely crappy story....no build up....no imagination....

Very good descriptions...very hot.

A pig remains a pig, no matter how much tail-straightener he uses.