by BrettJ
"The Constant Insertion of a Man's Rod" would have to last for at least 1/2 an hour to 45 min but 1st, he has got to try some 'Cunning Lingualism' out on me for at least an hour. No, regardless of what they say, a man has never died from Blue Balls. Oh, he'll want to but it's got to be inside a pussy or an asshole for at least an hour for maximum enjoyment of both the 'fuckee' & the 'fucker', ok?
I liked the story and it has potential, but I feel that you ran through it too quickly and made it too short, almost like you were just trying to get it done.
this ran like an express train through ideas that needed developing...bit akin to the fumblings of a teenage boy! All done at speed with no idea of what he's doing other than there is some pleasure to be had/given. Not your best story I am afraid...
This reads more like an outline for a story, rather than a full-fledged story. All highlights and no detail. No dialogue. No character development. No emotions. No motivations. Just brief descriptions of a series of sex acts.
Bit fast, slow it down a little. I agree that eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time is fabulous . My girls and I will act this story out and fuck each other senseless . Then start over as soon as we recover. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk