All Comments on 'There is Baking & There Is Cooking!'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
The title of her 1st physics paper will be....

"The Constant Insertion of a Man's Rod" would have to last for at least 1/2 an hour to 45 min but 1st, he has got to try some 'Cunning Lingualism' out on me for at least an hour. No, regardless of what they say, a man has never died from Blue Balls. Oh, he'll want to but it's got to be inside a pussy or an asshole for at least an hour for maximum enjoyment of both the 'fuckee' & the 'fucker', ok?

Horny_Mungo2Horny_Mungo2almost 18 years ago
Very sexy

a very sexy and funny story, I really enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good, but too Quick and Short

I liked the story and it has potential, but I feel that you ran through it too quickly and made it too short, almost like you were just trying to get it done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
o dear , so random

this ran like an express train through ideas that needed developing...bit akin to the fumblings of a teenage boy! All done at speed with no idea of what he's doing other than there is some pleasure to be had/given. Not your best story I am afraid...

Dark_StormDark_Stormabout 10 years ago
More of an appetizer than a meal

This reads more like an outline for a story, rather than a full-fledged story. All highlights and no detail. No dialogue. No character development. No emotions. No motivations. Just brief descriptions of a series of sex acts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hot hot hot

Bit fast, slow it down a little. I agree that eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time is fabulous . My girls and I will act this story out and fuck each other senseless . Then start over as soon as we recover. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk

SatyrDickSatyrDick12 months ago

[24.05.23]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

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