All Comments on 'There Is No Plan B'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fantastic Story!

Well written and very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

great storyline...I'd love to read another chapter in this saga

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This is really great!

Please continue, you have a talent for this stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Incestuosly great.

Keep it up especially under the premise of mother and son doing it right under the fathers nose or almost being caught. Loved it!

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
Loved it

Nice story enjoied it

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
Loved it

Nice story enjoied it

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

hope to read some more like this... great story

LongFellow877LongFellow877over 19 years ago
One

One-handedly good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
fact check

She's been married 16 years which makes him 15 at most. She's offering him drinks as if adult, 21 in most states. He's not going to be fully grown, father's physique at 14-15 yo. You need to know the logical consequences of all the facts you put into a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Congrats

Glad to see this was well received and appreciate your acknowledgement, even though I made only a few minor suggestions. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hope she's still fertile

She can tell the drunken jerk he fathered the child, even though she and her lover-son know better!

Leon22Leon22over 19 years ago
Wow, this was a great read.

I loved this story. Keep up the good work and write some more. I can't wait for your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
GreatmJob

Well done! One of the best I have read so far! More of Jason and his mom maybe! Keep it up..

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good stuff, plenty to work with to keep going

This was very good. You should have him get the father so drunk that he does his mom in the bed right next to his son of a bitch father.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fantastic

Fantastic story, one I'll re-read. Very well written. I look forward to a follow up, or similar.You do have one lined up I hope?

vargas111vargas111over 19 years ago
More!

I second the suggestion that Mom gets pregnant.

r0ket1r0ket1over 19 years ago
Incredible!

That was an INCREDIBLE story!. I cannot wait for the sequel(s) to this!. I would wait on the whole pregnancy bit though. Awesome!!!

tom smithtom smithover 19 years ago
comments on your writing

i think that you have a future in writing and would like to read more. keep up the good work and in your next one you can have that your mom gets pregnat ass that would really top it off. by for now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
WOW!!!!!!

I also recommend the pregnancy of mom and her lactating breasts. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Oops, I'm drooling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Pretty good...

The setup for this story made it good... the sex part was a bit too cliche mon-son taboo for my tastes however. Overall, I liked it though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Well Done

Very believable story. Had me at attention the whole time. Wish that instead of her shadow, that we got to see the real her. But my imagination was fun to explore too. Hope this story continues. I wouldn't want her to get PG. It would spoil having sex with her all the time and if I was him...it would be ALL the time. THANKS

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinalmost 19 years ago
Oh, YEAH!

Fantastic! I really appreciated the little twist at the end! Most Excellent

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Marvellous...

...development, keep writing like ths

David48David48almost 18 years ago
such a smart son

Didn't the kid figure his mom wouldn't know her husbands cock from someone elses? Or in just the way he shagged? Plan B? He's just incredibly lucky, is all. Mom is no fool. She was probably planning her seduction long before...

NookiehunterNookiehunteralmost 18 years ago
Sexy Mothers

There is nothing like a sexy mother. I had one and I had many a hard-on as a result. I never fucked her, but I dreamed about her often. If my father had not been such a terrific man, I probably would have at least tried to fuck her.

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
PLAN C

I have a plan C and its much better than this,you see I am not such a prognasticator as you

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 10 years ago

Loved this whole series. If the mother was sexier than Sophia Loren, then she was smoking hot!!!

csltcsltover 3 years ago
Excellent story!

Lucky Son!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
A big tit story?

I couldn't give a rats ass about a tit if there was a pussy in the room. I like B cup tits and an A cup over a D cup. Yep I'm an ass man, not a mommy issues tits man. That doesn't mean anal, I'm not gay. That butt houses the greatest thing on earth a pussy.

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 2 years ago

"There Is No Plan B, Ch. 01:" - Forty-Two Year Old Married Mother, Cecilia and Nineteen Year Old Virile Son, Jason.

Mother Cecilia is a conniving, fertile and horny married mother.....and she's (possibly) figured her son is ripe for taking his mommy-virginity. Momma fucks her son like it'll be her last fuck for this life time; son Jason can't get enough, and his mother seems to be aware of her son's incestuous sex needs. Let's hope Momma "forgets" her husband is (we hope) sterile, therefore she doesn't have the need for birth control with hubby. Son Jason is virile, horny and has enough baby-making seed for all female "cummers!" Great writing, character roles and unique themed mother/son sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

"I decided to found out"? You need help. You need better help. You need to not write if you can't do it without relying on spell checkers that don't find the problems.

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2021: Still around. About me: Divorced for 14+ years. Well-adjusted, 50something, educated professional with 2 great emotionally healthy adult kids. I've always been drawn to taboo sex, particularly adult, consensual family fantasies or experiences. I like stories/experie...

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