by aaron23062
Good story. Well written without the usual typos or spelling-errors I see in too many entries on this site. Thank you for not getting too vulgar, either. You treated the characters with respect. I'm curious -- why no sequel ?? It would be a shame not to read more about them.
it instantly drew me into the story that i might add was very hott and very well written
wowwwwwwwwww-damn that was hot. How about part 2? soooooooooooooooooooooo hot-we want more
Loved the story. So much emotion and tension in a single page.
Thank you,
-a