All Comments on 'They Grow Up So Fast'

A very believable story. Been there and almost done that, though not with a niece. I thought the ending was of a quality that is rarely found on Literotica. I really felt for both Alex and Hunt.

A very good story, it has all the things I like in an erotic story - interesting and believable premise, characters with depth and some great conversation!

Keep seeing more and more of this weird kind of fourth person narrative on here. It is a not terribly appealing style of writing. The remove makes it impossible to connect in any way with the story.

Not sure what you mean, Mr./Ms. Anonymous. This story was written in the classic 3rd person narrative. In fiction, there are only 3 main narrative voices. Perhaps you (or anyone else reading this) can explain what is meant by 4th person as it pertains to "They Grow Up So Fast."