All Comments on 'They Made Marion... Pt. 01'

by JSF79

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Excelent. Keep wrighting

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
All too short

I just wanted this to continue. The erotic sex scene was exactly that - erotic. Well written and a nice blend of the physical with the feelings. Well done and thank you. Looking forward to part 2.

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