All Comments on 'They Used to Call Me Mouse'

Excellent!

5

Loved it. I like how you think, and I try to do similar- find a scenario that's not cliche, add a challenge, let the heroine find themselves, (I especially like the Ranger reference and closer to home SAS training- don't mess with the girls) and there's the trademark Shelby happy ending. My only little complaint- its too short lol. Luv you. Chloe xx

This is not a category I normally read but I was intrigued by your title. This is a very good little crime story and I certainly enjoyed it. So it's five stars from me for the entertainment.

I loved it! Fun, exciting, sexy. A perfect balance. Thank you!

Absolutely incredible work, yet again. I hope to be as good a writer as you someday. Five stars.

Love your stories! Keep it up

What an excellent story. This is the first one if yours that ai have read so now I'm going to read a whole lot more of them.

Bring a crossdresser this is my favourite genre!

As usual, fantastic.

I admit the talk of government boobs was funnier than hell.

Terrific story! Almost like a TG film noir.

Another 5-star story. Just to point out a malapropism that shows up in too much writing here: 'When I was younger, I TAUGHT school. When I got myself into shape, I had TAUT muscles.'

Loved the story, but what happened to Steve? Clearly they broke up, but it was a bit disappointing to have him go from such an understanding partner to a nonentity without any acknowledgement

Loved it. Neat to have a real story besides sex. But did love the sex too. Also wondered what happened to Steve.

Thank. You

OMG this story is amazing. To bad Megan and Mel were just roommates. But I'd definitely like to read more stories like this from you. Keep up the good work.

Loved it! Caught one tiny glitch; How did he uber, if he nuked his phone? I may be the only person who saw that, no biggie.

Thank you all so much for the comments.

pcman, I guess I should have paid more attention when the teacher with the taut muscles taught us about checking for typos that aren't misspellings LOL

EricaDoesNow, all kinds of people will call an Uber for you, apartment doormen, hotel clerks and concierges, etc. Thanks for holding me to a higher standard.

Enjoyed it!

I'm a fan of your work. "All About Jesse" was the first Literotica story to bring a tear to my eye.

Not to pile on, but "Haven't seen him since he joined the fucking army. What a waist." Should have been "waste". Although a case might be made for "waist" in the context of the story.

I'm literally SCREAMING right now! I love this! I think I found my favorite one of your stories! I would love to read a novel length version of this! I think I might go read it again, very soon. 🥰