by James_Steele
Ever wonder if, just once in a while, people without massive tits or a cock twice the average size can still get laid?
This felt fairly familiar, following the same well-worn path you've taken us down before, but that doesn’t make it any less sexy or satisfying. Perhaps we could've had a bit more fucking, once the incestuous rubicon had been crossed? Also, what with the age difference and her thinking of him almost as a father, there could have been some daddy-daughter role play? Generally sibcest isn't really my thing, compared with mother-son or father-daughter fucking, but this was enjoyable.
If I could give this a 6 I would whole heartedly. Absolutely beautiful. Please for the love of god continue this story!
I came so hard and multiple times throughout. So sexy, I hope there is more! 10/10
As always your stories are a pleasure to read. Early on, I wondered if he bought his sister's body with the car. But it was clear that with the pillow talk later that was not the case. Thank you for sharing 5 by 5!
Probably one of my faves, if not my fave, among all your works!!! Would have loved to see more of them (daddy-daughter roleplay, marriage, pregnancy, creampie, and just many more) but I am already happy with this! Can't wait to read whatever more you plan on making. Sibcest (sole male and sole female) as well as daddy-daughter have always been my favourites and you more or less tried to do both here which was nice. 5/5
The hottest story of yours I have ever read. The whole story was just a tremendous turn on, bravo.
Super story! I only wish there had been more description of Jaye's thick booty. A couple scenes where he watched her in tight yoga pants would have been awesome, especially if her thong popped out.
Keep up the great work!!
The escalation to overtly sexual contact felt a bit quick for me to stay invested. First, all they do is share a hesitant kiss, and the next minute she's rubbing his crotch? If they truly had the hesitations about incest they say they do, it doesn't make sense for things to escalate so quickly. Additionally, a lot of the dialogue and writing felt a little juvenile and broke the immersion. It was very hard to take Dex calling his sister's tits "melons" seriously. It was better than most stories I see here though.
The comments below had a few valid points plus it lacked description in a few scenes but overall not bad. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Liter authors seem to be getting their ideas about the dialogue lovers speak not from their own experiences, but some really trashy gonzo porn. Nobody talks this way, or even acts like this in real life. Steer clear of the romance tagging if you're going to make them sound like they're being paid in cocaine to read some trite lines before the next fuck scene.
I really wish you would stop calling breasts melons like you’re shopping for fruit. It’s really childish and offputting. It would be like calling a penis a dingaling or breads “bazungas”.
You're seriously one of the best!! Would love to see a new story from you especially a bro/sis one!! check your page weekly for updates/new stories.
Great work!
Big request if you ever consider them: would love this as a series! Absolutely love these 2 and this story. The perfect balance you always strike between deep love and filthy dirty hot sex is just so perfect in this story. It is in all of your stories, but I think it's just this ticks so many boxes. Big bro who's much more of a father figure, crazy in love with his little sis, possessive but sweet caring but hot af . Would be an incredible series or just anymore of these 2 you can give us!
And ignore the negative remarks regarding you dirty talk . It's one of the things I love about you work. You have a way of writing dirty talk and dialogue in a way that makes verbiage that, in any other story would be horrific and cringey, into the hottest shit ever! Fucking love you dialogue and dirty talk. It MAKES your stories 5*.