All Comments on 'Things Aren't Always What They Seem'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Gawdawful

It's one thing when an author forgets the name of a character and changes it halfway through the story.

It's a load of crap when they change the GENDER of a character.

Beyond that wrecking the story, it was wrecked by its trite, formulaic style. Just crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I disagree with the other comment...

She thought the cop was a lady. He just had effimate features and a high voice. Of course, he had the requisite R.B.D. (Really Big Dick).

I thought the ending was funny, but why did the cop drop a 20 on the table with the licence? He couldn't stand a freebie??

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The Twenty

I think the Twenty was a subtle way of his to call her a whote as he was leaving. Kinda falls in with the Domination theme.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

This is not a lesbian story, it should not be under the ‘lesbian anal’ tag.

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