by eroticstorytellernnc
It's one thing when an author forgets the name of a character and changes it halfway through the story.
It's a load of crap when they change the GENDER of a character.
Beyond that wrecking the story, it was wrecked by its trite, formulaic style. Just crap.
She thought the cop was a lady. He just had effimate features and a high voice. Of course, he had the requisite R.B.D. (Really Big Dick).
I thought the ending was funny, but why did the cop drop a 20 on the table with the licence? He couldn't stand a freebie??
I think the Twenty was a subtle way of his to call her a whote as he was leaving. Kinda falls in with the Domination theme.