All Comments on 'Things Happen For A Reason Ch. 05'

The story is well written and great reading but a little on the confusing side. Why Luke left the first time is attributable to amnesia which makes him unable to explain it. Presumably Riley lied to destroy their chance at reconciliation. Why Luke suddenly goes from bedroom to den at the current time is mystifying. Does he believe or love her or not? He and the plot seem to vacillate considerably. Hopefully ensueing chapters will clarify the situation. Nice writing though. 60 year old George

Absolutely super... thank you for writing it. I can't wait to read the next chapter

great I am ready for the next

Keep up the excellent work. I'm very much enjoying reading the new chapters of this story every morning or after work.

L love this writing. There are always enough questions that need answering that your interest is strongly held.

It even gets kinda sexy sometimes.

Plot improving over the last chapter, renews my hope. But isn't it odd how one line of dialogue can confuse how a reader understands a characters emotional state? Ex "Well, she would only take so much, even from Luke." I understand the intent of the message but the delivery just seemed so out of character, but then that is just me.

anon jerry

You really think things happen for a reason? A bit delusional in my opinion. But I guess it's whatever trips your trigger. Mostly shit just happens, do to random events that have nothing to do with one another. But hell I like fairy tales too.

He's an idiot to not get a paternity test.