All Comments on 'Things Happen For A Reason Ch. 06'

Keep it coming, please!

Your the best writer I have ever come across on Literotica. You have to be a pro. Everything flows pretty smoothly. This story is great, can't wait for the next chapter.

The story could be a good one, except that there are unexplained gaps. Otherwise, it is ok.

The unexplained gaps are what you read the next chapter to learn about.

Don't read many mystery novels, do you?

This story is geat!

Love how the gaps leave me wondering what's next. Great story!

they do need to be plausible gaps.

I'm pretty much going with the flow of a good story, but the question of Jack's true father is NOT one that will remain in the "plausible gap" category in an age of blood and DNA testing, so I hope THAT's not going to be a major plot point for too much longer.