All Comments on 'Things My Sister Had Ch. 05'

the only thing i dont like about your chapters so far is having to wait for the next one.

where is this going? You will be dead by the time you 2 decide to have some fun.

This story is quite well-divided. Each chapter is a stage of development, and well-developed despite being but one page. I can't add much more than I'd already added. Good stuff.

As for "Too long"...heh, if it is, stop reading, Anonymous (not, not *you*, Anonymous, the other one). ;)

as said before either get to the sex or put it in the non erotic area. if there is no sex there is no incest or taboo also your chapters need to be longer.

DBRS

Man I have rarely seen such non appreciative comments for writing well done than this story. Well, outside of the Loving Wives category where the morally immature roam to declare any and all there to be inferior creatures. I appreciate the slow build up. I appreciate the way the characters are developing. I like the sliding into consciousness the mutual attraction and the way the character work at denial. All very human and so like the reality so many lead. Keep up the good writing.

any chance of picking up the pace somewhat!

I'm enjoying the build up more than the "wham-bam, thank you, Ma'am" stories normally found here. Keep it up. I'm enjoying the development.

yeah i agree shaman lol all these ppl that want sex and want it ... now!!!! it makes me laugh sounds like a 12 yr old kid looking at their first boob and cant control his excitement to see even more haha