All Comments on 'Things Take Time'

Yes, altogether.

May I repeat?

You don't write of sex: you write of Love.

Love, harm, anguish, tears and laught and smiles.

Life is all this; and you are a painter who takes shapes and colours and vibrations on the screen.

Thanks again.

And a kiss on the hand, from

Carlo fm Italy

Very lovingly written. I wish you would write more frequently.

dear Emma,

Thankyou for all your stories. I felt the love in all of them. As was to be expected with this class of story I was aroused and masturbated. But that was a sideline to the wonderful righting in all your stories. Thankyou for using your tallents for us mere mortals gratification.

EXCRUCIATING!!!!! (u love this word... don't u) ... u know... don't u?

Oh my Emmah, that was outstanding, you have unbelievable talent and I am so glad that you choose to share it. The hopes and fears, joys and tears of your characters show a side of you that has great compassion for others, once again, thank you so much for sharing

Peter

What the fuck love triangle was that: deprived of every n all logics

Love is another name of logic

I as an Indian really wonder if people are like that

whom feeling towarda their partner depends opn their last mood from the the most recent sex they have

Well only solace about this to me was that the above is only a fiction

but I really wonder is it really a fiction

Love,

Piu

Punjab India

Good erotic story of love. I sure wish you had a scene between Brian and Mary - interesting? I didn't feel you developed Brian enough

Thankyou so much for sharing your talent and deep inner feeling with us strangers, there is too much violence in every way of life, and to read your stories does make a difference how one feels about people.

Yes I loved my mother too,not physically, but we were soooo close.

Thankyou again.

"A year passed. Three words that take us in an instant from one time to another. That’s not how it happens for people."

Very beautifully written lines. Shows the talent beyond just erotic writing. BRAVO!!!

False starts, false stops, pretty much a pointless story. Neither fulfilling nor emotionally rewarding. Junk.

Ignore the idiot before me. It was a beautifully written story. I was so caught up in it that I couldn't stop reading till I reached the end. You have wonderful talent I would love to read more from you.

The best. I loved it.

I enjoyed it

Giving you a five seems so inadequate...but that's all I can do. The story was great!

This story was captivating. For me, it read like a poem exploring a single thread of love between two people to an inevitable conclusion. Thank you.

A story of shear genius! It was amazing the way you got into the characters heads and slowly brought them out. And that for once the story didn't involve a lot of wham, bam, thank you mom, but it was well understated. This was the kind of story that didn't need a lot of sex to make it work. Quite the opposite, and for once the son didn't keep forcing his mom to do what he wanted, and she didn't back down from her convictions. It was great! I loved it.

And as something of an aside, the grammar, spelling, and all that stuff they crammed into our heads in school were all there, I didn't find one typo, and the grammar was spot on!

So you have a lot of stories for me to read, and I'll be more than happy to read them.

Ted

Excellent story and top notch writing. Thank you for the grammar and vocabulary. You had me at ennui.

Nice story, I like it, but honestly, I don't like the ending:)