All Comments on 'Things That Go Hump in the Night'

I got to say I really enjoyed the story...It was well written it was sensual it was erotic You know where the character of peter is a lot like me... By the end of the story I Sadness cuz he found this woman who really was into him but he could never be with her but then he found out that there was one that he could be with...And I got to say the story has given me hope for my future not to sound too much of your emotional but thank you

all of your entries have been really good. I enjoyed every one of then and this one especially - perhaps because it could have been me.AA9B

I've just read a ghost story that was written almost 13 years ago, and it's had nearly 200,000 reads since it was posted, yet for me it had a freshness about it, an urgency, and I couldn't put it down. Your character development was smooth, the motivations clear, and you described the actions so well that it was like watching a video. Surely you know by now what a masterpiece it is, so I'll just thank you for sharing it with us.

Hans

Alright, to be honest this story is absolutely amazing. Many people who i assume are like me visit this site because its sexually stimulation in a way that gives passion, unlike any pornography video. This story exemplifies that and is written with great detail. Please keep writing like this.

I enjoyed that. As a shy nerd as a kid, I could only dream of something like that, impossible though it be. But as an old bloke now married for 53 years, I can remember my first but t wasn't as good as that.

.

So good. Story deserves more than 5 stars.

Beautifully and illustratively written. It remains vivid and beliveable in my mind.

STUNNED! ABSOLUELY STUNNED! WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY WISH THERE COULD BE SOME KIND

OF FOLLOW-UP, WITH THIS STORIES "PETER PARKER,"

Well done. You might need a more thorough proofreader though.

At one point you wrote, “…had bared witness.”

You meant, “…had borne witness.”

“Bared” is a past tense of “to bare” (or expose).

“Had borne” is the past perfect of “to bear.” (or carry)

Elsewhere you penned, “foul swoop,” which doesn’t fit (there was nothing foul or distasteful about the moment or the action of ensheathment), so I think you meant the more clichéd “fell swoop” which has come to connote a blinding swift action—although originally it was about a devastating smiting probably by a god or demigod.

Your stories are engaging when the words don’t trip you up. Keep writing.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Well done!