All Comments on 'Thirty Minutes to Go'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What...

.. was all that about?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
not a bad

story, definitely not complete, and an editor would do you wonders. Keep writing.

Wahoos1000Wahoos1000over 18 years ago
Your story needs some work

I would suggest an editor for your next submission.

As far as don87654's comments go, he's a complete idiot. Comments such as his have no place on this site or any other site for that matter.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Disgusting!

An obvious nigger story here. Not sure about how white culture can be used for a nigger culture story.

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