All Comments on 'Thirty-seven Years a Hunter'

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Comentarista82Comentarista8211 months ago

VERY interesting to write this tale from a first-person/diary perspective. I loved how you pulled it off.

Normally I'd say not going into detail about certain backstory items proves silly, but with how much you described everything else, I cannot fault those decisions. You kept us in the moment, reading what he thought and experienced, and this keeps a reader on the edge of one's seat. You portrayed the safari action well, and I appreciate how assertive you drew both Kam and Sharon. About the only possible issue I might have had was how Sharon decided not to go with the "doctor" but basically "come on" to John. I'm glad she did, though, and while you included the sex, it was not overboard by any means: you relied on storytelling to float your tale and you told it well. 5

TomNJaxTomNJax11 months ago

Another excellent story. I really enjoy your style and I have become an avid reader of your prose. Thanks for another fine tale!!

J6480J648011 months ago

Great tale, well research and written. most enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Engrossing and enjoyable read! Thanks.

Davester37Davester3711 months ago

This is another fine tale, expertly told. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A very, very fine tale and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks.

teedeedubteedeedub11 months ago

Delightful. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Every now and then I get surprised by a above average yarn.

Thank you.

Cheers

Crusader235Crusader23511 months ago

What a great story worthy of the five stars. I wouldn't mind reading of more of his adventures.

RasmatRasmat11 months ago

When I see your name in the new submissions, I can be certain, as with a select few other authors here, that I am going to enjoy a well written story with fully developed characters, a believable story line and a tasteful amount of sex.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You continue to produce a very wide variety of stories that are of a very high quality. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Excellent story!

5

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

If you love historical fiction like I do, this definitively is a MUST READ!

The Hoary Cleric

LoveIsGoodLoveIsGood4 months ago

Thank you for a sweet and simple story.

OvercriticalOvercritical4 months ago

I do hope that this author has ways to stay anonymous with the venom of the various subsets of do-gooders. He is sure to attract people who will revile him as a racist, a misogynists or worse. But he does write a good story and this is a bit unusual, but a good one. The MC's progress from one environment to another without missing much of a beat was creative. Certainly a man of all worlds. It wasn't his skills that were his main appeal, but his resilience as he moved from one environment to another. A talent sorely lacking today in our world of specialization. Certainly worthy of at least a 4*

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Women tend to be the central characters in my stories, because I find their complex personalities to be fascinating. My stories come from my life experiences or the thoughts inspired by people I have met. I am an avid fan of history and especially the history of the America...