All Comments on 'This Ain't Literature'

Very well done indeed. I would hope that there is more of this to come. Him steeling her away forever would make this story amazing! Thank you!

Most writers can’t write seduction, but you’re an expert. I wanted the story to go on and on. Thanks!

Mmmm. The thought of them getting caught by her young son and she didn't even stop really got my pushy wet

Loved the story, but isn't it a little harsh to send him off to Afghanistan? After all, if girls didn't love guys like that, there wouldn't be any!

Would love to read more about how he handles the younger ones.

Amazing build up! Would love to see a part 2, continuing relationship between the teacher and student.

Loved it! It would have been better if he wasn't an asshole but it is what it is. Wished you had detailed more of their fucking and less of his job, though.

... he really is a shit.

You are always so much fun to read.

So who does Camron turn into? At my HS reunion, I was surprised to find that many of my classmates had basically not changed and were simply older versions the same 18 year old, which was not very attractive. Others had matured and changed significantly. What would Camron be like say, 5 years? What might have changed him in that time, and how might Ms. Brett help him come to terms with what he'd been through? That would be a true love story...

A little Farsi goes a long way also known as Dari. I hated Iraq but the "Stan" was worse , it was much too easy to get sniper and rpgs were over used.

As always, a great read. Fantastic characters, great writing style and editing.

WOW. Terrific story and an exciting read. Hilarious. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story and plot. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters.

Oh how beautiful. He's going to the Stan to get his dick removed by the Taliban. Delicious. Hope he really enjoyed that sex! Karma is a real bitch, ain't it?

You are good. Very good.

Your writing is incredible. So good. What a despicable character but I couldn’t put it down