All Comments on 'This Changes Everything Pt. 03'

5 stars

Okay, now the cuckold incident has a purpose to the story. It's driving Samantha's motivation. But you should have downplayed it and made it a quick paragraph included inside this chapter instead of having it stand alone. But I'm loving it that Sam sees daddy as a good husband even though he isn't. I'll stay on board for a while longer. But be warned that you're still treading on thin ice.