All Comments on 'This Conversation Never Happened'

by Britease

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Calico75Calico75about 2 months ago

So unexpected and fun!

ibuguseribuguser4 months ago

Haha, good one.

MattblackUKMattblackUKalmost 2 years ago

Misdirection on a fairground roundabout! Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Totally unexpected and Loved it. What a great imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ha Ha!!!

I figured were it was going about mid way. Very funny!

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Got.me

Got me again, with another great short story. Hope Mike appreciated it.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Didn't catch it

Another funny story with a twist.

DarkerBindingDarkerBindingalmost 5 years ago
A good chuckle...

I came back to read it again, because it is that cleaver. Thank you for spinning the yarn...

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Caught me.out

That one I did not catch until the end. Great story.

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 5 years ago
Caught me surprise

Great story

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 5 years ago
ok

this one was quite clever and his heart was in the right place. #5 TK

VenustasVenustasabout 6 years ago
Absolutley Brilliant 5 star+

To fully appreciate just how brilliant it is you need to read it a second time as soon as you understand the twist.

But why am I not seeing any other comments for a story written over six years back - is my browser throwing a wobbly?

BigGuy33BigGuy33over 7 years ago
That...

...was fun.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 8 years ago
Second time through...

A fun flash tale. Five stars.

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 9 years ago
Very clever

Fun relaxing read. Thanks,

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
Saw That One Coming

Sorry, Brit, didn't fool me at all!

johnnyjonesjohnnyjonesover 10 years ago
Loved it!

Well done... They are getting better the lower into the alphabet we go! Another 5!

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
Very cute and nicely done.

I liked it a lot, thank you for writing.

mitchfrenmitchfrenover 11 years ago
Caught

Neat and funny!

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Made me laugh

That was a nice twist: didn't see it coming, and actually got me chuckling, which is a rarity in this category. Well done.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Yay

Not only did he fix another couple's marriage but it seems he's going to be having some big time fun himself.

Ha

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Ha

Talk about mistaken identity.

bruce22bruce22over 12 years ago
Nicely Done

Somehow I voted 5 stars on this one and then forgot to comment! I am getting ancient.

The old jokes were not identical to this story, they had the same superstructure of ideas but were different. Shakespeare "stole" all his plots, but his words! Even in the world of jokes the same written material comes out different depending on which comic is delivering.

Really a nice piece of writing by Britease!

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
KNOCK KNOCK RING A DING DING

who's there, who's this who did you call. TK U MLJ LV NV

chastenchastenover 12 years ago
That one got a chuckle!

Loved it...

Mandy01Mandy01almost 13 years ago
How'd I miss this little gem????`

Long time no hear??? Nice little ditty Brit. And I do have a nice pair of red four inch heels....roflmao

Always love your humour Brit, keep them coming.

Amanda

IrfonIrfonalmost 13 years ago
Copy ?

What everybody said !!

...you cunning linguist you....HAHAHAHA

Thanks.

brujaybrujayalmost 13 years ago
Great!

Thank you for the fun read.

RePhilRePhilalmost 13 years ago
Thanks for the smile on a Sunday Morning

Sometimes it's the little gems like ths one that put a smile on your face. For the crap I've heaved on some of your stories I retract it!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
funny and lite

A well done story, lite humor, almost a tongue in cheek type of story.

I enjoyed the read, thanks .

likegoodwinelikegoodwinealmost 13 years ago
Loved it

I love these short stories with a little twist.

jasonnhjasonnhalmost 13 years ago
Good one

Yeah, an old joke but still funny. I'd love to be a fly on the wall at the house of the wife that called him.

But come on, "Oh dear!"?????

jiminabjiminabalmost 13 years ago
Got me

A train coming? What train? That was a good one Brit. Thanks. Jim

cpetecpetealmost 13 years ago

Fool me once -shame on you

Fool me twice -shame on me

God dang it-you got me again!

victoriangentvictoriangentalmost 13 years ago
Slow day

Must have been a slow day around the ole pub. Not much original here Brit. I expect more from you. Flawless presentation, just no meat.

RHinSCRHinSCalmost 13 years ago
Funny

I could see the train a comin' , but it was still funny.

Scorpio44Scorpio44almost 13 years ago
Rehash of an old joke...

without a new twist. I expected something more.

zed0zed0almost 13 years ago
ROFLMAO!!!

Caught me out straight away! Thoroughly enjoyable read, O Henry has nothing on you.

Huma412Huma412almost 13 years ago

When he said to forget the conversation I figured it out. Very fun little story, thanks for coming up with it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Astonishing, amazing

Unespected, the best story I've read in a very long time, congratulations to one of the best writers in this site.

Boros749Boros749almost 13 years ago
Yes, you did

pretty clever. except, you usually know what your partner voice like even on the telephone. still good, thanks!

thebulletthebulletalmost 13 years ago
not bad but a rather old joke

I knew right away what was going on, since it was so similar to a comedy routine I heard 30-40 years ago.

That was a Jewish woman calling her Jewish mother, going through a long litany of problems, eliciting sympathetic and helpful responses, followed by mother promising to come right over to take care of things. When they finally realize that she has the wrong number, the daughter says, "Does this mean you aren't coming over?"

Other than that, a good story.

gatorhermitgatorhermitalmost 13 years ago
Way Cool!

This story put a BIG smile upon mt face. Good writing!

ohioohioalmost 13 years ago
Well done!

Funny and surprising. I can't say I'm usually fooled by stories with twists, but this one totally drew me in. Excellent job!

Thanks, ohio

AeroielAeroielalmost 13 years ago
Yep...

You "caught me out" & I really enjoyed it!!

ILienBagbyILienBagbyalmost 13 years ago
Absolutely

wonderful story.

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